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February 10, 2010

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Sal

Bermuda is going to be paying and cleaning up the Brown stuff for generations

The silence of PLP members and MP's says volumes about their hypocrisy and real social consciousness.

"I got mines, screw you bruthu "

lets not forget the real world,far from Ewrat Brown's Bollywood fantasy

what about this rock totally dependent on the price of oil for energy & commerce ?

BRANSON: 'Oil crunch within 5 years'...
Britain faces 'oil crunch' within five years, Richard Branson warns
An oil crunch more serious than the financial crisis threatens to strike Britain within five years, Sir Richard Branson and other business leaders have warned.

Alex

Great post.

Rummy

Your always talking about working on your words and writings.

Why do you always leave the most crucial to your last sentence.

Very well said.

Rummy.

AP

Hey Rummy this is the second comment in which you lecture on his writing structure, what are you his fucking English professor?

Denis Pitcher

Rummy,

Usually these posts are written as streams of consciousness with limited editing and proofreading. I do it to improve my skills as much as I can but also to get posts out more frequently as it can take a ton of time to fit in perfecting things when you've got a lot of other things on the go in life.

I often try to follow a few of the principles I've learned over time, though it usually comes with practice more often then not. Some of them come from "Made to stick" such as opening with your most important point first. Keeping it simple. Focus on one core point.

Often times I drift. As a mentor used to tell me when reading my work, "what were you trying to say? --- then why didn't you say that?". Another one he used to tell me was that "when you're done, people won't remember what you've said so much as how you made them feel." That's often why I try to end on a strong note.

Sometimes I fail to make a solid point, sometimes I say far too many things and over complicate. I make a lot of mistakes and feel there is endless improvement to be made. Though, for a kid who consistently got C's and D's in english class I figure i'm not doing too bad but always believe I could be doing a lot better.

Often times when I reread my work some time later it is clear to me how poor it was, what I could have changed here or what I could have changed there. Usually there's a lot I would have changed, though that used to be one of my biggest problems in school, I was always changing things as it was never good enough.

Of the utmost, I welcome your criticism and that of others. It helps me see and appreciate how others interpret what I'm trying to say and how well I got the msg across. If you could manage it I would be greatly appreciative if you could be as specific as possible in your criticisms so that I can identify how things could have been better worded, better spelt or better constructed to make a stronger and more cohesive argument.

As suggested, I'm keen to improve my writing skills and welcome all the help I can get.

Rummy

AP, there is no need for your approach with profanity. My comments are quite the opposite.

Dennis talks about writing skills etc. From a laymans point of view (mine) I find his work very well thought out and presented.

In fact I find his presentation, content, and research shows that his talent reflects years of hard work and I applaud him for that.

My comment about the last sentence is just that. Nothing overbearing on his summation just straight forward, too the point and easy for one to summise.

Your reading something that is not there and is typical of most posters these days.

I am not critical of your skills. I'm complimenting you on them Dennis. Your forum is a good read and I enjoy it.

Enough said about the subject but I would say that unless your working towards a masters in publishing keep doing what you do. You do it very well.

Rummy

Still waiting for my comments to be published after that attack and profanity

Rummy

A leap of faith here. "AP" is that Arthur Pitcher or am I loosing it.

If so, a great Head Day.

Thanks Dennis. Few come into your life and make a differance. You Have.

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